Resuming the Hemant-da series with a non-filmi geet.
A query for RMIM-ers: What do the lines in the last stanza
mean?

"aam de subah se jo gul ho vo charaab nahii.n
dil\-e\-maasuum sanam shaam sahar jalataa hai"

\startsong
\stitle{ashq aa.Nkho.n se ravaa.N}
\film{Non-film}
\year{}
\starring{}
\singer{Hemant}
\music{Tersemlal}
\lyrics{Santok Singh}
%
%Contributor: Prithviraj Dasgupta
%Transliterator: Prithviraj Dasgupta
%Date: Dec 28, 2000
%
\printtitle
#indian
ashK aa.Nkho.n se ravaa.N aur jigar jalataa hai
kyaa qayaamat hai.n ke barasaat me ghar jalataa hai

na kahii.n aag na shole na dhu_aa.N uThataa hai
vaah kis Dha.ng se ulafat kaa shahar jalataa hai
kyaa qayaamat hai.n ke barasaat me ghar jalataa hai

aam de subah se jo gul ho vo charaab nahii.n
dil\-e\-maasuum sanam shaam sahar jalataa hai
kyaa qayaamat hai.n ke barasaat me ghar jalataa hai.n

#endindian 
\endsong

Availability: Unforgettable Hemant Kumar: His best
non-film songs. HTC 04B 4455/6.

-Prithviraj

Hemant-da - A genius in his niche Website:
http://members.nbci.com/hemantda

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Message 2 in thread 
From: urzung khan (urzung@hotmail.com)
Subject: Re: ashq aa.Nkho.n se ravaa.N...Hemant-da - A genius#63 
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> 
> Resuming the Hemant-da series with a non-filmi geet.
> A query for RMIM-ers: What do the lines in the last stanza
> mean?
> 
> "aam de subah se jo gul ho vo charaab nahii.n
> dil\-e\-maasuum sanam shaam sahar jalataa hai"

  Perhaps you are confused by 'charaab' and 'gul'.
  Please correct them to 'charaaG' [=lamp,diyaa] and
  'Gul'[Gul honaa=bhuj janaa].

  The second line should be like:
  dil\-e\-maasuum\e\-sanam shaam\-o\-sahar jalataa hai
   
  The sher is simple but nevertheless beautiful. 


  urzung khan

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Message 3 in thread 
From: vulcan2001@mailandnews.com (vulcan2001@mailandnews.com)
Subject: Re: ashq aa.Nkho.n se ravaa.N...Hemant-da - A genius#63 
Newsgroups: rec.music.indian.misc
 

urzung wrote:
> 
> Prithviraj Dasgupta wrote:
> >
> > Resuming the Hemant-da series with a non-filmi geet.
> > A query for RMIM-ers: What do the lines in the last stanza
> > mean?
> >
> > "aam de subah se jo gul ho vo charaab nahii.n
> > dil\-e\-maasuum sanam shaam sahar jalataa hai"
> 
>   Perhaps you are confused by 'charaab' and 'gul'.
>   Please correct them to 'charaaG' [=lamp,diyaa] and
>   'Gul'[Gul honaa=bhuj janaa].
> 
>   The second line should be like:
>   dil\-e\-maasuum\e\-sanam shaam\-o\-sahar jalataa hai
> 
>   The sher is simple but nevertheless beautiful.
> 
>   urzung khan

not sure that "dil\-e\-maasuum\e\-sanam" would make an appropriate
meaning:

Giving my version of literations here:-

"aamad-e-subah se jo gul ho, vo charaag nahii.n
dil\-e\-maasuum, sanam, shaam-o-sahar jalataa hai"

it is not like a burning earthen lamp which gets extinguished because of
dawn arriving.
The innocent heart, Oh Dear, rather remains aflame throughout dusks and
dawns.

-Rawat

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Message 4 in thread 
From: urzung khan (urzung@hotmail.com)
Subject: Re: ashq aa.Nkho.n se ravaa.N...Hemant-da - A genius#63 
Newsgroups: rec.music.indian.misc
 

vulcan2001@mailandnews.com wrote:
> 
> urzung wrote:
> >
> > Prithviraj Dasgupta wrote:
> > >
> > > Resuming the Hemant-da series with a non-filmi geet.
> > > A query for RMIM-ers: What do the lines in the last stanza
> > > mean?
> > >
> > > "aam de subah se jo gul ho vo charaab nahii.n
> > > dil\-e\-maasuum sanam shaam sahar jalataa hai"
> >
> >   Perhaps you are confused by 'charaab' and 'gul'.
> >   Please correct them to 'charaaG' [=lamp,diyaa] and
> >   'Gul'[Gul honaa=bhuj janaa].
> >
> >   The second line should be like:
> >   dil\-e\-maasuum\e\-sanam shaam\-o\-sahar jalataa hai
> >
> >   The sher is simple but nevertheless beautiful.
> >
> >   urzung khan
> 
> not sure that "dil\-e\-maasuum\e\-sanam" would make an appropriate
> meaning:
> 
> Giving my version of literations here:-
> 
> "aamad-e-subah se jo gul ho, vo charaag nahii.n
> dil\-e\-maasuum, sanam, shaam-o-sahar jalataa hai"
> 
> it is not like a burning earthen lamp which gets extinguished because of
> dawn arriving.
> The innocent heart, Oh Dear, rather remains aflame throughout dusks and
> dawns.
> 
> -Rawat


 A couple of other minor corrections are needed,like:
1.Sould be 'ashk',not 'ashK' or 'ashq'.
2.should be 'hai' not 'hai.n' , wherever occuring.
2.should be 'me.n' not 'me' , wherever occuring.  

    "aamad-e-subah se jo gul ho, vo charaag nahii.n
     dil\-e\-maasuum, sanam, shaam-o-sahar jalataa hai"
 
Even now when I read the first line, its  meter does  
not feel right to me.
May be that some reshuffling of the middle words would
do the trick.But that is how I feel.I may be wrong. 

By the way,it is a Gazal,not a geet.Also with just three
shers it appears to be of less than 3 minutes recording,
not unusual.May be that one sher got chopped off in CD.
Without claiming a poet's imagination and/or perception, 
to me this sher will be as follows,until I am lucky
enough to hear this song myself:
               
'aamad-e-subah se ho Gul, ye vo charaaG nahii.n
 dil-e-maasuum,sanam,shaam-o-sahar jalataa hai' 

 
urzung khan